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help by Review and fix my CV (updated)


                                              

1- Personal Information:
Name                       :Mohammed Tawfeek Ahmad Amen
Nationality               :Egyption
Gender                    :Male
Date of Birth            :12/3/1983
Marital Status          :Single 
Military Status          : Eximpted until 2013
Permenant Address :15 Mohammed abd elrazik st
                                 kopry saft-saft elaban
                                 Telephone (+20) 0103001472
                                 E-Mail zamaliphe@gmail.com
                                 gizah, Egypt
Languages
                        Speak              Read             Write
Arabic              Excellent          Excelletn       Excellent
English             Very Good          Very Good       Very Good 
French              Fair               Fair            Fair  
Objective:
Searching for place where I can achieve experience opportunity
For creating and enhancing my skills


2- Education:
 High school graduation ::
   High school degree:  Diploma of Technical Schools  
   Name              :  Louxor technical schools  
   Graduated at      :  12/2000  Grade  73%  

3- Work Experience:
Title:  ceypeer cafe admin  Employer  tamer nabeel  
Country:  Egypt From  1/2005 To 4/2006  
Description:  work in some ceypeer cafes 
                as an admin and mantins  

Title:  an asstins of Technician air cooling  Employer  beeter hosny  
Country:  Egypt From  6/2006 To 12/2006  
Description:  an asstins of Technician air cooling   



4- Other Experiences:
Duration                                             Project/Experience Gained
localization or arabization of linux boot loaders     (agrub)

5- Skills and Training:


Computer skills:*:
 


:Good knowledge of:

maintain and configure (debian ,Arabian linux)

good knowledge in networking and routing (windows and linux)


             

*:operating system skills 

Microsoft Windows including 2000 Server and XP
Good knowledge of gnu/Linux



:main programming skills:*

C, C++
           
*:other programming skills
   
Bash script

:Web programming skills:*

HTML
Java script

:other skills :*
setting up and maintaining the Apache web server
Regular expressions
Advanced use of Unix-like systems, setting services such as ssh , samba 
various information in task scheduling,customizing the bootup procedure
disk management and process management, familiar with informational tools, user management and principles of security.

:additional skills:*

Perl script
PHP
Cascading style sheets (CSS)

:applications:*

office applications (Microsoft office,Open Office)



6- interests:

Computer science, programming, linux, robotics, electronics



المطلوب

المطلوب تحديدا قسم Education

انا حاصل على دبلوم فنى ثانوى صناعى قسم تبريد وتكييف نظام الثلاث سنوات من مدرسه الاقصر الصناعيه الميكانيكيه بمجموع 71%

ومعاف مئقتاً من الخدمه العسكريه حتى 1\2013

كيف يمكن اضافه هذه البيانات؟

وسأكون شاكراً جداً للمساعده

سوئال اخر هل يجب ان يكون الCV من صفحه واحده

حيث انه ليس كذالك

واذا كانت لديكم ملحوظات حول الCV برجاء اخبارى بها وشكرأ مره أخرى

YoussefAssad's picture

Timing?

By when do you need this CV?

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any time you are free

i have all the time in the world

case i think that my CV is not evin redy yat

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MSameer's picture

I think that the CV can be

I think that the CV can be more than 1 page, Just be reasonable. I've seen a CV with logos for companies the applicant worked for. That's bad.

My CV is about 3 pages.

شكرا على الرد

اولا شكرا على الرد MSameer

لكن كييف اضيف الخدمه العسكريه على اساس انى معاف مؤقتاً لم اانهى الخدمه

ثم هل هناك اى اخطاء او ملحوظات؟؟؟

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YoussefAssad's picture

> 1 page CVs

I've seen a lot of CVs. A CV is only supposed to be longer than a page or a page and a half if you have several doctorate degrees.

Long CVs is an Egyptian disease.

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MSameer's picture

Hmmm, Even if 1 page is

Hmmm, Even if 1 page is not enough ?

systems's picture

don't say tawfeek, say Tawfeek

First thing I note, is capitalization issue, I dont think sucha mistake is acceptable in a CV. Thus you name should be Mohammed Tawfeek Ahmad Amen not Mohammed tawfeek Ahmad amen Also don't say things like C, c++, make them both capital or both small, I would make them both capital, I am not sure thought what the convention on this is, but I doubt whoever will evaluate ur cv knowsn either, so just be consistent. Finally, all the CV I saw look like this. part 1: Name and Contacts (Address, phone, email, etc ...) part 2: career objectives, few lines, very brief part 3: Education chronologically, from the oldest to the newest part 4: Work experience also chronologically, usually if you work in many many place for short periods of time, it is recommended you removed the work experience that were very brief (between 1 to 3 months)(unless of course you were like a freelancer, in this case all ur work experience will be of that type) part 5: skills, categorizd by skill type, this should be short, i dont think adding things like vim and nano or emacs is very bright, unless you know how to write extension for emacs or something, but if all u know is how to open, edit and close those editor, i think you should not add them in this case part 6: hobbies, this is very optional, but it wont hurt. part 7: some personal informal, like your marital status and military status All the CV in the world looks like this, you can squeeze it in one page especially if you didnt work in that many places, but 2 pages is ok i think, some ppl aslo, deliver mogaladat a dozen pages or so when you describe ur job, impress, use big words, make them think u were the president, where u worked when you describe ur skill, i recommend u be more prudent, its know that in egypt ppl would add to their cvs thing they merely know, like one would add MS Access, and all he did was using in the simplest ways, I recommend you be very honest descrining your skills, but, very proud describe ur jobs, even if all u did was browse the net and chat


-- W. B. Yeats, He Wishes for the Cloths of Heav

thanks but anwther reviw pleases

systems's picture

I can think of 3

I can think of 3 comments. Part 7, references, as far as I know reference means documents that verify everything u said, like ur school diploman, ur uni diploma, training results, keda ... and usually ppl write in it "furnished upon request" And in the parts about diplomas and experience, if you want to use a table format then just make it a two columns one column containing the date and the other, everything else, name of diploma, job title descriptions we keda Finally, I dont like the part about the skills, but then this is subjective, but I dont understand the asterix '*' thingie!!!! looks odd and confusing the me


-- W. B. Yeats, He Wishes for the Cloths of Heav

systems's picture

I just noticed

In section one, usually at the the top of the CV you just put ur name, address, telephone number and email (in this same order) And the left over personnal data like ur date or birth, nationality military status, and marital status etc ..., are usually at the bottom of the CV, but above the references clause with is always the last thing, ... Also its probably not necessary to say ur gender (actually i found this a little bit spooky!), its evident from ur name plus the military status clause the language skills are also better placed after the other skills this should be all, good luck job hunting


-- W. B. Yeats, He Wishes for the Cloths of Heav

ezabi's picture

Gender!!!

An employer may disregard CV's with the gender field before screening in order to avoid any later discrimination issues, so you never mention your gender, religion, ethnic background, etc.. in a CV

So long and thanks for all the fish.

ezabi's picture

Spell check

-Military status:Eximpted==>Exempted So long and thanks for all the fish.

ikhnaton2's picture

move to wiki

Zamaliphe, if you still interested in making changes into your CV, move it to a wiki of your own and tell me. We can work out to make it better.


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